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Here we list the O, Q, R, and U texts and identify their source citations.
NOTE: The citation format for non-P text is experimental and subject to change.
O-text
The Silmarillion could never be anything but hard to read
01.FW.002→ Shippey, T.A. The Road to Middle-earth, Chapter 7, p.201.
Bilbo acts as the link between modern times and the archaic world of dwarves and dragons
01.FW.002→ Shippey, T.A. The Road to Middle-earth, p.185.
Where The Silmarillion differs from Tolkien’s earlier works is in its refusal to accept novelistic convention. Most novels (including The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings) pick a character to put in the foreground, like Frodo and Bilbo, and then tell the story as it happens to him. The novelist of course is inventing the story, and so retains omniscience: he can explain, or show, what is ‘really’ happening and contrast it with the limited perception of his character.
01.FW.008→ Shippey, T.A. The Road to Middle-earth.
disappointment in those who wanted a second Lord of the Rings
01.FW.009→ Shippey, T.A. The Road to Middle-earth.
It’s like the Old Testament!
01.FW.009→ personal communication to Christopher
One quality which [The Lord of the Rings] has in abundance is the Beowulfian ‘impression of depth’, created just as in the old epic by songs and digressions like Aragorn’s lay of Tinúviel, Sam Gamgee’s allusions to the Silmaril and the Iron Crown, Elrond’s account of Celebrimbor, and dozens more. This, however, is a quality of The Lord of the Rings, not of the inset stories. To tell these in their own right and expect them to retain the charm they got from their larger setting would be a terrible error, an error to which Tolkien would be more sensitive than any man alive. As he wrote in a revealing letter dated 20 September 1963:
[see below under
U-text for letter quoted as01.FW.012]To go there is to destroy the magic. As for the revealing of ‘new unattainable vistas’, the problem there—as Tolkien must have thought many times—was that in The Lord of the Rings Middle-earth was already old, with a vast weight of history behind it. The Silmarillion, though, in its longer form, was bound to begin at the beginning. How could ‘depth’ be created when you had nothing to reach further back to?
01.FW.011-013→ Shippey, T.A. The Road to Middle-earth.
to tell [the stories that are only alluded to in The Lord of the Rings] in their own right and expect them to retain the charm they got from their larger setting would be a terrible error
01.FW.023→ Shippey, T.A. The Road to Middle-earth.
Quenta Silmarillion was no doubt one of Bilbo’s Translations from the Elvish preserved in the Red Book of Westmarch.
01.FW.033→ Foster, Robert. The Complete Guide to Middle-earth.
Anyone interested, as I am, in the growth of The Silmarillion will want to study Unfinished Tales, not only for its intrinsic value but also because its relationship to the former provides what will become a classic example of a long-standing problem in literary criticism: what, really, is a literary work? Is it what the author intended (or may have intended) it to be, or is it what a later editor makes of it? The problem becomes especially intense for the practising critic when, as happened with The Silmarillion, a writer dies before finishing his work and leaves more than one version of some of its parts, which then find publication elsewhere. Which version will the critic approach as the ‘real’ story?
01.FW.036→ Helms, Randel. Tolkien and the Silmarils, p.93.
Christopher Tolkien has helped us in this instance by honestly pointing out that The Silmarillion in the shape that we have it is the invention of the son not the father
01.FW.037→ Helms, Randel. Tolkien and the Silmarils.
it is very clear indeed that we shall never be able to see the progressive steps of authorial thinking behind The Silmarillion
01.FW.038→ Hieatt, Constance B. ‘The Text of The Hobbit: Putting Tolkien’s Notes in Order’.
English Studies in Canada, VII, 2, Summer 1981.
Q-text
fares about in a foam of business
01.FW.044(omits ‘it’ after ‘about’) →01:P6.032
are full of a chattering and a smell of fish, and great conclaves are held upon its ledges
01.FW.044(has ‘its’) →01:P6.045(has ‘their’)
fares at the rear in his fishy car and trumpets loudly for the discomfiture of Ossë
01.FW.044→01.P6.048
R-text
‘Farewell, my hobbits! May we meet again in my house! There you shall sit beside me and tell me all that your hearts desire: the deeds of your grandsires, as far as you can reckon them…’
The hobbits bowed low. ‘So that is the King of Rohan!’ said Pippin in an undertone. ‘A fine old fellow. Very polite.’
01.FW.005-006→LR 3.08.139-140
The world was fair, the mountains tall,
In Elder Days before the fall
Of mighty kings in Nargothrond
And Gondolin, who now beyond
The Western Seas have passed away…‘I like that!’ said Sam. ‘I should like to learn it. In Moria, in Khazad-dûm. But it makes the darkness seem heavier, thinking of all those lamps.
01.FW.017-022→LR 2.04.184,189
some books of lore that he had made at various times, written in his spidery hand, and labelled on their red backs: Translations from the Elvish, by B.B.
01.FW.031→LR 6.06.117(“some” is from first edition)
the three large volumes bound in red leather
01.FW.031→LR pr.note.002
These three volumes were found to be a work of great skill and learning in which…[Bilbo] had used all the sources available to him in Rivendell, both living and written. But since they were little used by Frodo, being almost entirely concerned with the Elder Days, no more is said of them here.
01.FW.032→LR pr.note.004
attempt to present the diversity of the materials—to show “The Silmarillion” as in truth a continuing and evolving creation extending over more than half a century
01.FW.034→ Silmarillion Foreword
a complex of divergent texts interlinked by commentary
01.FW.034→ Silmarillion Foreword
to work out a single text, selecting and arranging in such a way as seemed to me to produce the most coherent and internally self-consistent narrative
01.FW.034→ Silmarillion Foreword
U-text
I do not think it would have the appeal of the L.R.—no hobbits! Full of mythology, and elvishness, and all that ‘heigh stile’ (as Chaucer might say), which has been so little to the taste of many reviewers.
01.FW.003→ Letter 182 (TCG #531)
I am doubtful myself about the undertaking [to write The Silmarillion]. Part of the attraction of The L.R. is, I think, due to the glimpses of a large history in the background: an attraction like that of viewing far off an unvisited island, or seeing the towers of a distant city gleaming in a sunlit mist. To go there is to destroy the magic, unless new unattainable vistas are again revealed.
01.FW.012→ Letter 247 (TCG #622)
A story must be told or there’ll be no story, yet it is the untold stories that are most moving. I think you are moved by Celebrimbor because it conveys a sudden sense of endless untold stories: mountains seen far away, never to be climbed, distant trees (like Niggle’s) never to be approached—or if so only to become ‘near trees’…
01.FW.015→ Letter 96 (TCG #221)
I am doubtful myself about the undertaking
01.FW.023→ Letter 247 (TCG #622)
I am afraid all the same that the presentation will need a lot of work, and I work so slowly. The legends have to be worked over (they were written at different times, some many years ago) and made consistent; and they have to be integrated with The L.R.; and they have to be given some progressive shape. No simple device, like a journey and a quest, is available.
I am doubtful myself about the undertaking…
01.FW.024-025→ Letter 247 (TCG #622)
was telling of things already old and weighted with regret, and he expended his art in making keen that touch upon the heart which sorrows have that are both poignant and remote
01.FW.028→ Beowulf: The Monsters and the Critics (last para)
The legends have to be worked over…and made consistent; and they have to be integrated with the L.R.
01.FW.034→ Letter 247 (TCG #622)